This quiz works best with JavaScript enabled. Home > English Grammar > Grammar > Writing Style > Concision In Writing – Quiz 1 🏠 Homepage 📘 Download PDF Books 📕 Premium PDF Books Concision In Writing Quiz 1 (56 MCQs) Quiz Instructions Select an option to see the correct answer instantly. 1. What sentence uses the word desolate correctly? A) He tried to desolate the argument by providing clear facts and evidence. B) After the concert, the once-busy street looked desolate and abandoned. C) The documentary focused on the desolate effects of climate change on wildlife. D) She decided to desolate her room with bright colors and modern furniture. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) After the concert, the once-busy street looked desolate and abandoned. 2. Which is more concise? A) Imagine someone trying to learn the rules of chess. B) Imagine a mental picture of someone engaged in the intellectual activity of trying to learn what the rules are for how to play the game of chess. C) All the above. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Imagine someone trying to learn the rules of chess. 3. Voltaire was both disappointed and excited when he found out that his favorite coffee shop, Candid Coffee, was moving to a new and larger point. A) Location. B) Position. C) NO CHANGE. D) Orientation. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Location. 4. Numerous research projects, including the benchmark Framingham Heart Study, demonstrate that taking a vacation can have well-connected health benefits. A) Prestigious. B) NO CHANGE. C) Weighty. D) Valuable. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) Valuable. 5. Choose the most concise sentence. A) Introverts rarely choose to work in groups but often prove to be productive members. B) It is rare that introverts choose to work in groups, but they are often productive team members. C) Introverts may prove to be productive team members, and they make positive contributions to groups at work. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Introverts rarely choose to work in groups but often prove to be productive members. 6. A wordy sentence is A) Contains unnecessary words. B) Is frequently too short. C) Needed to pad the writing. D) Makes the writer seem more intelligent. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Contains unnecessary words. 7. How does ambiguity affect clarity? A) It makes the sentence clear by removing vague language. B) It makes the tone more formal. C) It strengthens the writer's purpose. D) It confuses readers with double meanings. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) It confuses readers with double meanings. 8. What sentence uses the word devise correctly? A) She was able to devise the long book in a single day. B) They planned to devise the garden with a variety of flowers and plants. C) The scientist managed to devise a new method for converting sunlight into energy. D) He was surprised to devise the mountain peak through the dense fog. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) The scientist managed to devise a new method for converting sunlight into energy. 9. Balancing the budget by Friday is an impossibility without some kind of extra help.Which sentence is the best revision? A) Without extra help by Friday we will never balance the budget. B) Balancing the budget is impossible. C) Balancing the budget by Friday is impossible without extra help. D) Balancing the budget by Friday is an impossibility. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Balancing the budget by Friday is impossible without extra help. 10. Sahil believed in the importance of excellent customer service, but it was a challenge to remain professional when the customer ordered a fruit smoothie, complained that it tasted like fruit, and then dumped the drink on the floor when she was denied a refund. A) An obstruction. B) An opposition. C) An impediment. D) NO CHANGE. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) NO CHANGE. 11. What can you eliminate from this sentence:During that time period, many car buyers preferred cars that were pink in color and shiny in appearance? A) In color. B) Buyers. C) Many. D) Pink. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) In color. 12. Which option is more concise? A) Students must complete the application. B) It is required that students complete the application. C) All the above. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Students must complete the application. 13. Which uses active voice? A) The research department checked your figures. B) Your figures were checked by the research department. C) All the above. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) The research department checked your figures. 14. What sentence uses the word dilemma correctly? A) They decided to dilemma the distance as quickly as possible. B) He enjoyed a delicious dilemma for dinner last night. C) The bright colors of the painting created a visual dilemma. D) She found herself in a dilemma when choosing between two equally appealing job offers. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) She found herself in a dilemma when choosing between two equally appealing job offers. 15. What is one of the unnecessary words you could eliminate in this sentence:Before the travel agent was completely able to finish explaining the various differences among all of the many very unique vacation packages his travel agency was offering, the customer changed her future plans? A) Agent. B) Plans. C) Various. D) Offering. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Various. 16. Backlash against the senator's education bill only hurled her to work harder to ensure its passage. A) Heckled. B) Launched. C) No Change. D) Spurred. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) Spurred. 17. In a reluctant manner, John held a lengthy and in-depth conversation with his teacher, and then John asked his teacher for advice. A) No change. B) Reluctantly, John spoke at length with his teacher, asking him for his advice. C) Reluctantly, John held a drawn-out and in-depth conversation with his teacher, and so he asked that teacher for advice. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) Reluctantly, John spoke at length with his teacher, asking him for his advice. 18. Twice as many Japanese men as American men smoke, yet the deaths attributable to smoking are half as much as ours. A) Half of. B) No change. C) Half the number. D) Half as many as. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Half of. 19. Eggs are high in cholesterol and ..... A) Rather fat-filled. B) Get fat. C) Getting in fat. D) In fat. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) In fat. 20. When the weather outside is cold and ..... , I like to be indoors. A) Gets windy. B) Windy. C) Starting to get windy. D) Getting windy. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) Windy. 21. More than half a decade after the magnitude 7.0 earthquake that leveled Haiti, serious public health and social problems tolerate. These include inadequate housing, political corruption, and the spread of cholera. A) Pursue. B) Keep going. C) Persist. D) NO CHANGE. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Persist. 22. There was a total of twenty-six punches that hit the losing boxer. A) No change.,. B) A total of twenty-six punches hit the losing boxer. C) The losing boxer was punched twenty-six times. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) The losing boxer was punched twenty-six times. 23. All Molly wanted to do was navigate a direct route to the beach, but her GPS kept losing its signal. A) Voyage. B) Maneuver. C) Convey. D) No Change. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) No Change. 24. Another way to avoid wordiness is to A) Combine sentences when possible. B) Explain things clearly by repeating important information. C) Use action verbs. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Use action verbs. 25. Redundancy is ..... A) Combining two simple sentences. B) Explaining an idea clearly and completely. C) Explaining the same idea two or more times. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Explaining the same idea two or more times. 26. What sentence uses the word deplete correctly? A) He was amazed to deplete the height of the mountain. B) The garden was deplete with a variety of colorful flowers. C) She managed to deplete the puzzle in record time. D) The long journey began to deplete their energy reserves. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) The long journey began to deplete their energy reserves. 27. My dog not only likes to play fetch, but he also ..... A) Like to chase cars. B) Liked to chase cars. C) To like chasing cars. D) Likes to chase cars. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) Likes to chase cars. 28. The supply manager considered the correcting typewriter an unneeded luxury.Remove what unnecessary word? A) Correcting. B) Manager. C) Supply. D) Unneeded. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) Unneeded. 29. The X-15, a hypersonic rocket-powered aircraft operated by the U. S. Air Force, could reach speeds of up to as high as 4, 520 miles per hour. A) No change. B) Upwards and close to. C) Nearly. D) Nearly as high as. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Nearly. 30. This past year, Bridgestone offered something unprecedented, as they introduced a new, high-spin golf ball that bites into greens like no other. A) No change. B) New golf ball. C) High-spin golf ball. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) High-spin golf ball. 31. During his trip to the Vancouver Zoo, a man was shocked when an escaped baboon stole his ice cream. Afraid of sustaining serious injuries, the man consented to the baboon that he keep the ice cream, which wasn't his favorite flavor anyway. A) Authorized the baboon to. B) Let the baboon. C) No change. D) Granted the baboon permission to. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) Let the baboon. 32. My neighbor, who lives nearby, is extremely rude. A) No change. B) My neighbor is extremely rude. C) My nearby neighbor is rude. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) My neighbor is extremely rude. 33. At Maloney High School, there were seventeen spectators who showed up at the Maloney High School baseball game at the hour of 4 p.m. A) No change. B) Seventeen people attended the 4.p.m baseball game at Maloney High School. C) At Maloney High School, seventeen spectators attended the Maloney High game at 4.p.m. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) Seventeen people attended the 4.p.m baseball game at Maloney High School. 34. Technical Writing should ..... A) Be concise. B) Be confusing to the reader. C) Be written in texting format. D) Contain long sentences. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Be concise. 35. What can you eliminate from this sentence:The microscope revealed a group of organisms that were round in shape and peculiar in nature? A) In shape. B) Round. C) Group. D) Revealed. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) In shape. 36. What does "precise language" mean in writing? A) Using longer, simpler phrases. B) Using broad generalizations with an academic tone. C) Using words that are clear and specific. D) Using an informal tone for relatability. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Using words that are clear and specific. 37. Suzie believed but could not confirm that Billy had feelings for her. A) Had a feeling, but wasn't sure,. B) Assumed. C) NO CHANGE. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) Assumed. 38. That old lady's dogs have a habit of barking on nights during which the moon in the sky is full. A) No change. B) That lady's dogs have a habit of barking when we see a full moon in the night sky. C) That old lady's dogs habitually bark when the moon is full. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) That old lady's dogs habitually bark when the moon is full. 39. Some residents were surprised by how Senator Nikita Kapoor voted on the tax bill, but she argued that her intentions had been crystalline from the beginning of her campaign. A) Clear. B) Limpid. C) Sheer. D) NO CHANGE. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Clear. 40. What revision improves clarity here? "He ran really fast because he wanted to win the race, and he also didn't stop." A) "He didn't stop because he ran fast.". B) "He ran fast to win and never slowed down.". C) "He was running a race to win it.". D) "The race he ran was to win and fast.". Show Answer Correct Answer: B) "He ran fast to win and never slowed down.". 41. Why is redundancy a problem in writing? A) It adds formality. B) It clarifies confusing details. C) It repeats an idea unnecessarily. D) It improves sentence flow and clarity. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) It repeats an idea unnecessarily. 42. Located on the northern coast of South America, Suriname perpetuates the most untouched rainforest on the continent. A) Stashes. B) Stores. C) Preserves. D) No Change. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Preserves. 43. In my own personal opinion, I believe that all amusement-park roller coasters should be required to undergo thorough and complete inspections. A) No change. B) In my opinion, I believe that roller coasters should be required to undergo thorough and complete inspections. C) In my opinion, amusement park roller coasters must all undergo complete inspections. D) I believe that all roller coasters must be thoroughly inspected. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) I believe that all roller coasters must be thoroughly inspected. 44. As a psychotherapist, I spend my days listening to men and women talk about their failures, their disappointments, their shame. A) No change. B) In the company of men and women hearing them. C) Hearing the thoughts of both men and women as they. D) Listening to all sorts of individuals and other people. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) No change. 45. Which sentence shows correct subordination? A) The lights were bright and the power surged. B) Bright lights surged power and made it stop. C) Because the power surged, the lights became bright. D) The lights and the power surged at the same time. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Because the power surged, the lights became bright. 46. What is the best fix for sentence wordiness? A) Remove unnecessary phrases. B) Use multiple adjectives for tone. C) Add extra transition words. D) Make it sound more advanced. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) Remove unnecessary phrases. 47. As I listen, I can hear the chuckling and laughing as I walk down the crowded and overpopulated public streets of Chinatown. A) No change. B) I can hear the chuckling as I walk down the crowded and public streets of Chinatown. C) I can hear chuckling as I walk the crowded Chinatown streets. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) I can hear chuckling as I walk the crowded Chinatown streets. 48. Which revision makes the sentence more precise and concise? "She did it, and it was great." A) "She did the job, and it was amazing.". B) "She completed the task successfully.". C) "She worked, and it was cool.". D) "It was awesome that she did it.". Show Answer Correct Answer: B) "She completed the task successfully.". 49. We tried to steady ourselves with our walking sticks but slipped and stumbled because of the jumbled rocks we were slipping on. A) With each step. B) NO CHANGE. C) Despite any efforts to remain steady. D) Even though we used our walking sticks. Show Answer Correct Answer: A) With each step. 50. Which word would best replace "good" in this sentence? "The movie was good, and everyone seemed to enjoy it." A) Informative. B) Lackluster. C) Engaging. D) Okay. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Engaging. 51. Last summer I learned to play tennis, to swim, and ..... A) Rides a horse. B) To ride a horse. C) Ride a horse. D) Riding a horse. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) To ride a horse. 52. She had ideas of her own, including an idea of hers for a torpedo with a radio-controlled guidance system. A) One idea that she had. B) NO CHANGE. C) Her own idea. D) One. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) One. 53. What sentence uses the word diligence correctly? A) They served a special diligence at the celebratory dinner. B) Her diligence in studying for exams resulted in excellent grades. C) The bright colors of the painting created a visual dilemma.The diligence of the sun setting over the mountains was breathtaking. D) He hoped to diligence the distance to the next town by nightfall. Show Answer Correct Answer: B) Her diligence in studying for exams resulted in excellent grades. 54. What makes this sentence unclear? "After meeting with Jordan, Taylor said she would take the lead." A) It lacks specific evidence. B) It contains too many adjectives. C) It uses a confusing metaphor. D) It's unclear who took the lead. Show Answer Correct Answer: D) It's unclear who took the lead. 55. Before the Black Plague hit Europe in the 14th century, medieval people did not bathe by submerging themselves in a tub of water, which they considered an act of debauchery. Instead they quickly cleaned themselves with water and a cloth. A) Sheathing. B) Engulfing. C) No Change. D) Drowing. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) No Change. 56. The purpose of writing about literature may be to share your responses, provide knowledge and information about a real literary work, or evaluate a work in review. A) No change. B) Provide information about a real literary work,. C) Provide information about a literary work,. D) None of the above. Show Answer Correct Answer: C) Provide information about a literary work,. 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